What a night!
Richard awoke to the not-unfamiliar herd of elephants trampling through his brain.
A quick scan of his body confirmed all limbs were present. He vaguely remembered the usual arm-wrestling challenges. Standard. 100% record still in tact. He’d beaten a big lad. Rough. That didn’t go down well, Richard smiled. The bigger they are the harder they fell.
Then what?
A hazy memory of a drunken rematch suggested. Big Lad wanted revenge. He searched his memory. Oh no! Surely not!! Well that explained the pain in his shoulder and the blood and mud that covered hands.
It’s been a while (3 years in fact – I didn’t realise it was quite that long! – but it’s so good to be back. Thank you for still being here! Friday Fictioneers – every week a story in 100 words or less. My personal challenge is to be bang-on 100.
Welcome back to Friday Fictioneers 🙂
That was a life-changing fight. Hope none of us are in such situation though.
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I’m astounded he only got away with a few cuts and bruises!!
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The last competitor may have been bigger than he remembers
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A night to remember. Or maybe not. Welcome back.
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haha 🙂 Thank you very much – it’s nice to see your face again and read your stories. I can’t believe it’s been so long! Hope you’re well x
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That’s some night! The next one might be worse.
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Ha ha I really hope it 😂
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Sounds like a night he’d rather forget! Guess he’ll be aiming for a re-rematch!
Here’s mine!
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I wonder what else happened that he can’t remember!
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I’ve had a few of those mornings myself. Well told.
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Thank you. Yes those elephants are regular visitors here too
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Welcome back and great way to start again! Quite a night to forget…
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Lovely to see you again! Thank you very much x
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🙂
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Some arm-wrestling match if it resulted in flattened trees! He must be a giant lol. Interesting take, well done!
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Thanks very much
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Great to read a new voice in FF. Welcome!
I liked the way you made the reader do some work, imagining, for example, what the herd of elephants was – and, of course, what on earth macho posturing had taken place when the big lad got his revenge!
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Thank you 🙏
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I have three sons. Arm wrestling was common, until the youngest one beat the other two–and his dad 🙂
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Ha ha that sounds like the family games of monopoly until we started winning and Dad’s enthusiasm started waning 😂
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Yup. Fun while it lasts, though 🙂
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I really like the way your MC pieced things together to tell the story. Welcome back to Friday Fictioneers, SarCou.
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Thank you very much. It is a joy to be back. I left you all when I needed you the most!
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🙂 You’re welcome and cheers!
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Hopefully, there’s not more to be revealed. I like the elephants trampling through his brain. Ver descriptive. Welcome back to FF!
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Thank you very much. And thank you very much 😉 it’s great to be back
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SarCou,
What a night! Maybe he regrets remembering it now. And I wonder . . . did his opponent survive? Hmmm.
pax,
dora
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Physically maybe – but whether his ego survived is another question 😂
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What a night! Some big lads, in my experience, are very bad losers. Just saying.
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Totally! 😂😂
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I love how you connect the picture to the trampling elephants. The narrator should go back to bed. Not such a great memory to wake up to.
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Ha ha a good sleep and a meal deal from a local fast food place and he’ll be right as rain
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Welcome back. Sounds like he has a problem when he can’t remember the next morning.
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I think it’s a testimony to my ‘coming of age’ in 90s Northern England. Standard Saturday morning.
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Ah, to be young and stupid again. Or maybe not. Good take on the prompt
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